It looks interesting but audio quality is awful, it's unwatchable. Redo the audio.
For some reason I decided to take up animation even though my computer is a piece of crap. Saving for a new computer!
A few thoughts:
- for the first 30 seconds nothing happens. In fact, the whole video has a weird pacing. A normal person would have closed the video after the first 3 seconds. Think at that if you're aiming for Youtube.
- use a 16:9 ratio
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